tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post4338017740518708082..comments2024-03-13T19:08:10.619-07:00Comments on 四零後: 今年全港詩詞創作賽,填詞冠軍「江城子.蝸居紀實」四零後http://www.blogger.com/profile/07721892232323290832noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-79113513867274072932014-10-07T19:11:58.902-07:002014-10-07T19:11:58.902-07:00[[夢裡繁華都換了: 渾不似, 那些年.]]
那才是值得細味的......................[[夢裡繁華都換了: 渾不似, 那些年.]]<br />那才是值得細味的.....................................................<br />Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-74821389363220109902014-10-07T16:48:06.361-07:002014-10-07T16:48:06.361-07:00如果說第一名的是[寫實幽默 ] , 那第二名的可是 [借景寄情] , 不過太隱晦了, 也不是一下子就...如果說第一名的是[寫實幽默 ] , 那第二名的可是 [借景寄情] , 不過太隱晦了, 也不是一下子就能看到.<br /><br />初看第一段, 總會覺得那只不過[為說新愁強作愁] , 不到最後一句, 你也不知道[別有所指] : 詩人墨客躲在陋室看的盡是[微不足道] 的事情 , 實在 [ 豈有此理] , 不過你再想深一層, 就知那是[ 情非得已].<br /><br />這詩很有李後主的味道.<br /><br /><br />全港公開詩詞比賽 第二名:<br /><br />江城子. 苔痕<br /><br />連宵新雨活蝸延 : 繞牆邊, 遍階前.<br />篆字迴紋, 沾露寫戀箋.<br />點染春心知幾許? 憑寄與, 倩誰傳?<br /><br />荒園泥濕屐痕鮮: 綠芊眠 , 且留連.<br />暈碧舖青, 蘚徑鎖寒煙.<br />夢裡繁華都換了: 渾不似, 那些年.<br /><br /><br />好!!!<br />能寫出這樣心境的, 應該不是 七/ 八十後罷………………………………………<br />Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-41893456282721905092014-10-05T10:15:09.394-07:002014-10-05T10:15:09.394-07:00[江城子.蝸居紀實]真是好詞, 令人[愛不釋手] , [ 唸不絕口].
…………………………………...[江城子.蝸居紀實]真是好詞, 令人[愛不釋手] , [ 唸不絕口].<br /><br />……………………………………………………….<br /><br />早上六點去修後園野草: 才一星期 , 又長高了, 都是多得近期 [ 淫雨] 相助.<br />[野草燒不盡, 春風吹又生]<br />越拔越有氣, 棄了工具 , 就到附近的唐人店買酒喝.<br />一邊嘆著清涼的[藍妹], 一邊感慨自己的人生.<br /><br />看著長得正茂的野草, 想起了這詞, 也就試和一下自嘲:<br /><br />[燦叔回流住劏房:<br />一尺檯, 五尺床.<br />廚廁共用, 衫在房晾.<br />欲伸懶腰羞無處 , 腳觸門, 頭踫牆.<br /><br />鄉下本來有祠堂 :<br />四大房, 八個窗.<br />音響環迴, 書房百尺長.<br />奈何人去早樓空, 歸根夢, 是空想.<br /><br />( Liu 天涯醉客寫於四壁居)<br />Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-30389837568683698412014-10-05T09:00:26.979-07:002014-10-05T09:00:26.979-07:00一個[ 緣] 字.
就以提及的日劇為例, 第一集是松隆子主演的,
講呢個靚女幾十歲啦, 仲係黏住老...一個[ 緣] 字.<br />就以提及的日劇為例, 第一集是松隆子主演的, <br />講呢個靚女幾十歲啦, 仲係黏住老豆, 兩個人相依為命,<br />佢老豆擔心差不多要寸步不離 , 半個鐘打個電話咁濟...........<br />....................................................<br />安哥講的心情我了解, 但又覺得過量一D.<br />可能係我幾歲就開始[食自己]的關係, 對人生好淡.<br />...............................................<br /><br />攪到安哥個版面咁 , 唔好意思.<br />我都係怕同擔心累左朋友.<br />如果可以 , 幫我[吸] 上面提及的[ 風流子] 出來 , 可以嗎? 在第4頁.<br />我對這詞牌有感情 :<br />以前我就是用[ 留風寺] 和[ 留風寺和尚] 來寫東西的.<br />謝謝.<br />祝周日快樂.Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-84997516081040394712014-10-05T08:37:45.889-07:002014-10-05T08:37:45.889-07:00已經叫個仔摷你............已經叫個仔摷你............四零後https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721892232323290832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-23241010478384552422014-10-05T08:36:33.713-07:002014-10-05T08:36:33.713-07:00有時,有些電腦平台好鬼抵死, 唔俾你"吸皮"㗎, 好似天涯咁,好多老友冇咗符, ...有時,有些電腦平台好鬼抵死, 唔俾你"吸皮"㗎, 好似天涯咁,好多老友冇咗符, 就講番我係上海做嘢時我嘅秘書妹妹, 都入唔到去, 佢已經好鬼叻同醒㗎!<br />世間上真係好多無奈嘅事情, 呢样濕碎啦!<br />已經叫個人摷你推薦嘅日劇, 呢啲野,佢至叻, 唉,佢三十幾仲未有拖拍,老鬼心都實!大仔係香港撈得唔錯, 不過只生兩個女孫, 祖宗輪到我, 絕咗咯!<br />細仔係度,香港女仔唔多, 土生唔啋佢, 番女佢又唔啱,強国人佢又溝通唔到(亦都不能門當戶對,佢地個個都係腰纏萬貫,我地係寒門),唯有日夜對住個電腦,一放工就扲!<br />唔係話你, 人真係要有個伴, 尤其黃昏時近, 我係老套, 個細仔冇個伴, 係我最揪心嘅!我兩個"再移民"佢一個人冇人冇物咁點算?嗱,你話我咁,係唔係果個法文好啱用呢,,,,,de ngongirl!四零後https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721892232323290832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-76128819942830640372014-10-05T06:41:36.101-07:002014-10-05T06:41:36.101-07:00此情此景, 只能以郁達夫的[ 風流子] (1926)....自嘆......
唉.............此情此景, 只能以郁達夫的[ 風流子] (1926)....自嘆......<br />唉.......................Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-24954402378897144452014-10-05T04:05:47.515-07:002014-10-05T04:05:47.515-07:00此留言已被作者移除。Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-82462911845284768482014-10-04T19:56:15.889-07:002014-10-04T19:56:15.889-07:00大佬呀!快啲刪咗佢,你靠害咩!千祈唔好咁爆呀,一陣俾"烚糉"啲手下見到,唔見咗個...大佬呀!快啲刪咗佢,你靠害咩!千祈唔好咁爆呀,一陣俾"烚糉"啲手下見到,唔見咗個老友,快啲刪你首詞, 拜託!四零後https://www.blogger.com/profile/07721892232323290832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-74443261648765711032014-10-04T18:53:29.317-07:002014-10-04T18:53:29.317-07:00此留言已被作者移除。Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-38577801413903846692014-10-04T18:13:27.007-07:002014-10-04T18:13:27.007-07:00此留言已被作者移除。Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-32045952562743553052014-10-04T12:33:55.978-07:002014-10-04T12:33:55.978-07:00此留言已被作者移除。Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-27634892069672077942014-10-04T12:28:55.135-07:002014-10-04T12:28:55.135-07:00此留言已被作者移除。Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-164470911276716542014-10-04T04:50:56.067-07:002014-10-04T04:50:56.067-07:00此留言已被作者移除。Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-25491908251021531202014-10-04T03:57:21.268-07:002014-10-04T03:57:21.268-07:00安哥咁叻既, 可以截取到那邊的版面 .
我試過好多次想攞 郁達夫的詩都Copy 唔到出來.
安哥教...安哥咁叻既, 可以截取到那邊的版面 .<br />我試過好多次想攞 郁達夫的詩都Copy 唔到出來.<br /><br />安哥教下我得唔得?<br />唔駃等我抄到手軟, 心灰意冷......................Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-10341038097760422582014-10-03T17:27:19.124-07:002014-10-03T17:27:19.124-07:00此留言已被作者移除。Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1687972345947196856.post-4333819431283576202014-10-03T17:21:21.057-07:002014-10-03T17:21:21.057-07:00此留言已被作者移除。Liuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10085035010048831039noreply@blogger.com